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My courage
My strength
My bravery
My guts

I see you
I want you
Protect you
Be with you

Search me
Try me
Test me
Hurt me

Love him
Embrace him
Show him
You love him

Her beauty
Her traits
Her smile
Her energy
©2004-2009 ~Artistic-A
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written in a way so one word will repeat four time in on staza..

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:iconlissimelin:
=) Surprisingly...I can relate to this...

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~*~~* while I breathe, I hope*~~*~
:iconhibara:
a very unique kind of poem... lol... hmmm... all i can say is ...wow... :wow:

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I'm sorry...
I didn't mean it...
I'll be good...
I'm gonna kill you....
I'm gonna blow your head off like raspberry jam!
:iconpoemystery:
nice relation of the title to the poem... i like this style and i'm jealous i never tried it first! lol ... anyways artistic-a good luck with your love life! great poem btw.

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my existance is a mystery
to all that surround me...
they feel my presence,
but never know who i really am
inside.
:iconartistic-a:
really? wow! kool

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"there i was standing, but no one showed up"
:iconartistic-a:
haha..simple idea eh? maybe i should be comina entrepremeur

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"there i was standing, but no one showed up"
:iconartistic-a:
thxs ^^

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"there i was standing, but no one showed up"
:iconcatwings7:
That's how me and me soulmate kinda first met. :heart:!! we both admired each other for a while, and then got together! yea! good job!

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Cats Rule! ;p
[link] don't click this link if you want to keep yer soul!!!!
:iconartistic-a:
kool kool! i am glad i can bring back nice memories with this poem ^^

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"there i was standing, but no one showed up"
:iconcatwings7:
ye sure did, laddy!

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Cats Rule! ;p
[link] don't click this link if you want to keep yer soul!!!!

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