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The strangest feeling is surrounding me
When she is gloomy, I get upset
When she is cheerful, I am content
I am always smiling with her
Though I miss her a lot when I don’t see her
Breathing this feeling is torture
It is an affliction I hate to suffer
But I wish and desire too
Is this what they call love?
Or is it just I?
©2004-2009 ~Artistic-A
:iconartistic-a:

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thoughts..thoughts..thoughts... written around 4 days ago.. never had time to post it up tho

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:iconhibara:
hmm... another good theme... is the atnosphere of the piece same with yours??? i wonder... interesting...

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I'm sorry...
I didn't mean it...
I'll be good...
I'm gonna kill you....
I'm gonna blow your head off like raspberry jam!
:iconusuzumi:
interesting poem u haf here. nice and short.. which i will read for sure.. lol
*implying me lazyiness to read >.>*

hmm to the last two QQ.. i haf no idea since this prob. neva happen to me.. o.O

well haf fun and 'do research' quote by steven from the x-mas gram lol
woo im sourcing my quotes.... anyway im just bored thatz all >.<

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silence of the ocean breeze
thou i shall wait for you
return to me, please
:iconartistic-a:
lol..i dunno.. good question tho

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"there i was standing, but no one showed up"
:iconartistic-a:
sourcing your quotes?

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"there i was standing, but no one showed up"
:iconpoemystery:
artistic-a *sob sob* i wish i was in love! lol... then i could write beautiful poetry like you. . . or are u in love? me no clue, anyways, great poem, i love it so much me +favs... ttyl artistic-a...

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my existance is a mystery
to all that surround me...
they feel my presence,
but never know who i really am
inside.
:iconartistic-a:
yay! thxs poem mystery =P let's say..i have been inspired!

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"there i was standing, but no one showed up"
:iconpoemystery:
good good ma friend... lets just say you inspired me!

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my existance is a mystery
to all that surround me...
they feel my presence,
but never know who i really am
inside.
:iconartistic-a:
lol..how did i do that?

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"there i was standing, but no one showed up"
:iconusuzumi:
nvm.. im just saying from steven's x-mas grab to ya 'RESEARCH'

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silence of the ocean breeze
thou i shall wait for you
return to me, please

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